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tolong dirate design ane yah

Discussion in 'Desain Web & Grafis' started by davidck, Jun 4, 2011.

  1. davidck

    davidck Ads.id Pro

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    saya punya design beberapa sih...untuk brosur dah kejual kemaren dan business card nya juga

    kira2 apa yang kurang atau bagus kah designya??

    pertama kali belajar manipulasi,ane manipulasi foto ini
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    trus kedua nyoba2 manipulasi foto gak jelas..hahaha
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    trus ngetes tracing foto sendiri jadi vector
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    trus ngetes buat brosur dan business card yang kemaren kejual,kecil sih..cuma 300rb...
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    tolong di-rate yah gan semua...saya sebenrnya hobi ngedesign...dan saya tipe orang yang paling mementingkan design,khususnya pewarnaan dan tata letak... :D


    kalo jelek dan gak bagus,tolong yah gan dikasih saran dan kritiknya..thx banget yah.. :D

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    waduh,kok buat 1 trit jadinya 3 trit??tolong donk om momod dihapus
     
    davidck, Jun 4, 2011
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  2. lunix

    lunix Newbie

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    dikasih rate berapa yah.... 7/10 deh...:D
     
    lunix, Jun 8, 2011
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  3. riFFrizz

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    5.5/10 deh, hihiiih
     
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  4. m4g1c14n

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    OT Bentar, itu kamu ada jual jasa buat bikin tralis, tangga, dll gitu?
    kebetulan gua lagi mau bangun rumah baru , kalau harganya pas mungkin gua mau kenalin ke kontraktor gua :)
     
    m4g1c14n, Jun 10, 2011
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  5. adepane

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    gambar 1. Rate 6.5/10
    trus, ane kurang suka gan tulisan harga murah kualitas terjamin background bintang itu.
    mending logo di buat left bottom dan ditambah 1 gambar penampakan lagi.

    kartu nama Rate 7.
    simple. tapi ane kurang yakin dengan hasil CMYK nya. kalo RGB nya manteb.
    soalnya shadow dari strip putih bisa menimbulkan efek jelek kalo udah di print
     
    adepane, Jun 10, 2011
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  6. xenovesta

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    hi juragan.
    kalo menurut ane, yg brosur ntu keren gan.
    yg laen juga bagus.
     
    xenovesta, Jun 22, 2011
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  7. encik7

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    wow gambar wajah api itu sangt menarik!
     
    encik7, Jun 26, 2011
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  8. kang tejo

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    alo gan,
    kl yg gambar2 diedit ane no comment yah, kl buat yg brosur 7/10, bagus gan kl nurut ane
     
    kang tejo, Jun 26, 2011
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  9. Cress

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    cuma sekedar pendapat ane aja gan :)

    pattern damask yg dipake diatas mnrt ane uda kelewatt pasaran, smua orang pake damask, biar unik kenapa gak coba pattern lain ajah? mungkin pattern floral, leaves ato arabic, chinese dll

    brosur ane kasi 7/10 jg =)) klo yg diatas terlalu kecil ane gak bs liat qualitas ato editannya hehehe

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    **maap gan kayaknya double post error :( **
     
    Cress, Jun 30, 2011
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  10. Landak

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    1. 7/10 2. 6/10 3. 7/10 4. 8/10 5. 6/10
     
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